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The Finished Novel Course
From idea to submission-ready novel.

Four steps. One year. A manuscript ready for literary agents.

1

The Big Idea

The Big Idea
Find your story
2

The Big Write

The Big Write
Draft the novel
3

The Big Edit

The Big Edit
Revise to a submission standard
4

Manuscript Assessment

Manuscript Assessment
A full read by a big five editor

The complete writer-to-author journey

Begin with an idea bold enough to deliver a stand-out story. Outline it. Then, write the novel hard and fast with motivational coaching from a bestselling author. Edit your draft to submission standard with a Big Five editor. Your manuscript gets a full read with our Ultimate Manuscript Assessment. Only The Finished Novel Course includes this comprehensive, detailed, professional feedback from our editorial team, and a plan for submission to literary agents.

By the end you’ll have a finished manuscript revised to submission standards and, when your manuscript is ready, an invitation to our submission service to leading literary agencies.

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Find the idea with a novel in it, then build it into a working outline. Two phases, thirty lessons, and a coaching session to sign off your storyline before you write.

PHASE ONE · 15 LESSONS

The Secrets of Storytelling

  1. Lesson 1: You, the Writer
    Storytelling is your birthright, a cunning art that can reverse inequalities, unsettle the natural order, and work magic even where none exists. Stories rely on credibility in the voice and bait in the promise, and both must work together. You should write first for yourself, choosing an idea that satisfies your own needs. Story and voice are inextricably linked. Find a natural voice and leave bad writing habits behind. Begin with a task to hear your own voice, capture it, and use it from here on out, starting your writing like a real writer from today.
  2. Lesson 2: Find Your Story
    Story is the answer to almost every writing problem, and this lesson shows you how a strong premise grows from simple ingredients arranged with structure, taste, experience, and outlook. You will be shown the sources of great ideas and stay open to humble beginnings, personal meaning, dreams, music, and the books you love, all of which point you toward the kind of story only you can write. The task will help you study the patterns of the stories personally meaningful to you, to enable you to mix the elements to begin shaping the building blocks of your own idea.
  3. Lesson 3: Make It Mission Impossible
    A great story begins with a problem at the edge of plausibility, a dilemma or quest no ordinary person could survive. This lesson shows you why starting with the impossible gives your novel power, ambition, and momentum. You learn how realism disguises artifice, how detail keeps the reader convinced, and how a bold premise lets you outwit doubt and stay committed. The task will introduce you to a natty way of producing the silver bullets your story will need to fire, in less than five words per idea.
  4. Lesson 4: The Elements of a Bestselling Classic
    Discover the big moves of the all-time great stories so you can spot the ingredients that give fiction its lasting power. You will learn why writers steal, recycle, and remix ideas, how comps guide the industry, and how classic tales rely on extreme situations, magic, or misdirection, and an immersive “walk in my shoes” experience. Discover why readers want familiarity with a twist, why small stories endure, and how fairy tales and folk tales act as potent story starters. In the task, you will produce five more ideas using these prime movers.
  5. Lesson 5: The Wound
    Powerful stories grow from flaws, failures, rejection, and old hurts to find the authentic and highly individual material that gives a story its universal force. You will see how childhood losses, transformations, and hidden selves shape voice, theme, and character, and how honesty, not performance, brings your work to life for readers. Explore how authors rewrite what they couldn’t fix in life by giving the problem to someone else in fiction. Tap the most unique source for your idea, (behind you!) to create a story with real human stakes.
  6. Lesson 6: Write What You Need
    Your sense of justice shapes the narrative arc of a story. Your values drive every choice, from crime to romance to comedy. The expert author has the skill to work with their own nature to reveal crucial aspects of the players they need. Explore unrealized possibilities within yourself, learn how desire and conflict form the spine of a story. In the task, you will get a good grasp of the art form of the novel as the moral journey of one individual and use the arc of their character development to deliver a satisfying outcome.
  7. Lesson 7: The Main Squeeze
    Explore how stories hinge on the one person who experiences change and grows. Understand how main character, hero, and narrator are three roles you can assign for your different purposes. Discover how to build sympathy without making them “you,” in order to choose someone capable of transformation. Load them with flaws, danger, and desire to begin plot development. Find out how physical detail, predicament, and personality shape the reader’s attachment. In the task, you will gather candidates for your main character, sketch their traits, and test who has the strongest problem to drive your story forward.
  8. Lesson 8: The Hero
    A hero is shaped by resistance, tested by circumstance, and revealed through their curiosity, decency, and sometimes a flaw that marks them as chosen. You will explore how ordinary people become heroic when pressed by injustice, how kindness earns allegiance, and how a cosmic flaw can be the sign of grace that drives the story. Discover how stories align the reader with the rebel who resists. In the task, you will map the tests, trials, and setbacks that could forge a hero worthy of your story.
  9. Lesson 9: The Friendly & Familiar
    Familiar people, places, and objects give your story its grounding, even when the plot sends your main character into danger, magic, or mystery. You will see how a benevolent presence — a guide, sidekick, or moral anchor — keeps the reader safe, and how chosen objects act as emotional tokens that signal home, history, and values to steady the reader before you lead them into the unknown. In the task, you will identify the friendly forces and familiar tokens that will reassure your reader and keep your story world worth fighting for.
  10. Lesson 10: The Villain
    Every story needs a worthy enemy that both the outer antagonist who blocks the hero and the inner foe the hero must face down to grow. You will explore why villains are charismatic, why they mirror the hero, and how their certainty, charm, and self-regard sharpen the story’s moral stakes. Understand how the villain embodies the shadow side of your theme, defending the status quo while the hero pushes for change, and why the story only ignites when these forces collide. In the task, you will cast a convincing villain and shape the dance with the devil that drives a great plot.
  11. Lesson 11: Justice
    Discover the hidden universal code of stories that quietly shapes the consequences of the best-loved tales. Learn how even the wildest plots obey a simple principle: something wrong must be set right. Understand how decency, retribution, restitution, and moral growth underpin the great stories. In the task, you will sketch how each of your budding story ideas might be developed to rebalance the scales and deliver justice.
  12. Lesson 12: The Garden of a Story
    Explore the garden as the world of your story; a place that is transformational. You will see how great writers use setting not as wallpaper but for the purpose of revelation: a landscape that exposes desires, fears, illusions, and the deeper truths for the main character. You will discover how your choice of place can act as sanctuary, or tighten the screws. Understand why setting is a state of mind, not a surveyor’s map. In the task, you will make your first sketch of the setting for your best idea in play so that you, as the author, can begin to spend time there in your mind as you develop the strongest idea so far.
  13. Lesson 13: Toward Conflict
    Explore how temptation, bribes, and taboos push a story by shaking a character’s moral balance. You will see how a hero is tested not only by hardship but by desire, distraction, and the quick fixes that expose their flaw. Learn why characters must lose control before they gain it, why injunctions spark plot, and how conflict arises when two value systems collide. You will learn that the battle is short, sharp, decisive and reveals what your main character truly stands for. In the task, you will define the value-based clash that drives your story toward the all-important drama of conflict.
  14. Lesson 14: The Treasure
    What your character thinks they want is not as valuable as the deeper revelation they (and the reader) actually gain. Learn how withholding the treasure keeps pages turning, how great stories create endings that never truly end, and how the finest tales offer a form of resurrection: hope, renewal, continuity beyond time. In the task, you’ll define your character’s concrete desire, draft the message-in-a-bottle that reflects the story’s deeper wisdom, and chart the trials and gifts that frame the journey from suffering to reward to produce the spine of a plot.
  15. Lesson 15: The Story So Far
    You will gather everything you’ve created so far and test it for strength and staying power. You’ll stretch the ideas that still excite you, try which voice feels right for each, and compose the story elements that belong together. We will ensure your chosen idea suits your natural storytelling instincts, aligns with the books you love, and carries the big moves that make a story worth writing. You will shake down your ideas against a clear set of criteria to select the strongest contender and firm up the elements you need before we start outlining.
PHASE TWO · 15 LESSONS

Outlining Your Story

  1. Lesson 16: Story Structure
    Begin shaping the strongest of your ideas using our five-part structure that underpins long-form fiction. You’ll see how writers across genres use a clear sequence to organize plot, deepen character, and guide the reader toward a meaningful ending. You will discover how this structure sharpens your thinking, reveals gaps in your idea, and helps you test whether your story has the fuel it needs for The Big Write. In the task, you will map your idea against each point of our unique method, The Five Fs®, to see how your emerging story can take shape on the page.‍
  2. Lesson 17: The Big Question
    Every great novel sets one clear pursuit in motion from the outset, then keeps it alive through reveal, concealment, setbacks, and rising stakes. You will discover how the question shapes your story’s pitch, your opening, and the reader’s hunger for more, and how even literary novels work hard to keep that question front and center. In the task, you will write your core question then raise its urgency by testing the stakes, adding obstacles, and framing it in the simplest, strongest form possible.‍
  3. Lesson 18: The Treatment
    Explore how the treatment of your story, the narrative perspective and sense of time, shapes the story itself. You will learn why first person draws us into an individual’s condition while third person reveals the wider social view, and how the choice determines the kind of justice your story delivers. Discover how timeframe influences tension, how a ticking clock sharpens change, and how perspective affects connection, theme, and pace. In the task, you choose the viewpoint that serves the theme of your strongest idea, and test timeframes to heighten drama.‍
  4. Lesson 19: The Theme
    Let’s pin down the engine that sits beneath your story. Learn why a theme must stay hidden, why it must be humble rather than grandiose, and explore how the genre, casting, and structural essentials like the midpoint reveal the truth your story will be circling from page one. In the task, you will sketch possible themes, note what your main character gets wrong at the start, and identify the midpoint moment when the truth will surface; your best test of whether this idea deserves a book.‍
  5. Lesson 20: Starting to Plot
    Begin shaping the chain of cause and effect that will carry your story from its opening hook to its resolution. You’ll discover how theme and character work together to generate plot. Explore your character’s before and after, and identify which antagonist embodies the opposing end of the value set of your theme. In the task, you will map the conflict across The Five Fs, create early plot beats using desire, denial, and resistance, and sketch the first passes of your story’s journey; your first true blueprint for the story ahead.‍
  6. Lesson 21: The Cast
    Consider how your characters line up on the rope of your theme, each pulling in a different direction to create tension. Our Four Types give you a way to balance your core cast; a Type A anchor, a Type B hothead, a Type C charmer, and a Type D villain create the necessary push and pull to keep a story moving. You’ll see how their company, circumstances, and contradictions reveal who they are without heavy description. In the task, you will position each cast member along your theme, decide who is pulling your main character off-course or keeping them steady, and begin a very private (!) list of minor characters borrowed from real life to bring instant depth to your world.‍
  7. Lesson 22: Feeling for Your Main Character
    Make the reader’ care from the first page by grounding them in essentials like where we are, who we are, and what’s happening before anything dramatic occurs. Simple, steady opening passages reveal a character through tokens, habits, and the way others react to them. Develop craft skills to avoid over-exposition and overwriting... for good! In the task, you will draft a clean opening snapshot, clarify what your main character wants and why, choose the form of agency that drives them, test whether they truly have the most at stake, and build a list of artifacts to bring them convincingly to the page.‍
  8. Lesson 23: The Midpoint
    Refine your storyline by nailing the pivotal moment that spins your story on its axis and forces your main character to change. The midpoint is the point of no return; it kills false hope, exposes the flaw, and breaks their old coping strategy so completely that your character can no longer delude themselves. This moment reveals the theme, strips away the cover story, and triggers the transition from BEFORE to AFTER...where the fightback begins! In the task, you will identify the event that changes everything, test how your character suffers the consequences of earlier errors, and nail the reversal: flaw exposed, want disproved, and the first glimpse of what they truly need.
  9. Lesson 24: The B Story
    A secondary storyline strengthens the theme and sharpens the main character’s journey. The B Story shows the far end of your theme: an alternative life, a dangerous promise, or a tempting delusion. It must come into conflict with the A Story to expose what your main character needs. You’ll see how the B Story accelerates the crisis, reveals the risks of the opposite value system, and prepares your character to stand on their own two feet once both ends of the rope are dropped. In the task, you will generate possible B Stories tied to your theme and identify which one collides most powerfully with your main storyline.
  10. Lesson 25: The Second Character
    The second character stands at the opposite end of your theme, shaping conflict and growth. This character is never a duplicate of your main character; they often hold the qualities your hero lacks, and their presence creates light and shade to amplify your theme. This figure can function as sidekick, nemesis, antihero, or love interest. Ultimately, theylose something in the exchange while your main character gains what they need from them. In the task, you will design a second character who contrasts with your hero to give your main character the lessons they cannot learn alone.
  11. Lesson 26: The Wider Cast
    Now we are ready to widen the cast! You’ll revisit the four personality types, explore archetypes for inspiration, and learn where to find your minor characters. Supporting characters bring energy, conflict, humor, contrast. Understand how to use the subconscious emotional “messaging” of even the most minor character. The lesson closes with the “20 Vital Signs”; a lightning-fast biography exercise that brings your principal players into focus and generates plot ideas as you write. It all adds up to a richer world, sharper dynamics, and a cast ready to cause trouble.
  12. Lesson 27: Writing the First Outline
    Now you are ready to shape a first working synopsis. You will gather the fundamentals: where we find your main character, what they want, why the reader cares, and how the agent of change tips their life off its axis. You will sketch the early beats of pursuit, failure, pressure, and the turning point that destroys their old strategies. You will also consider theme, genre, setting, treatment, and the forces that stand against your hero. In the task, you will draft a one-page outline. This helps you test the mechanics of your drama.
  13. Lesson 28: Testing the Opening Chapter
    Test your treatment on the page with simple, unfussy writing that serves the story. Develop craft skills to deliver an opening that is steady and confident, and learn how to use ordinary detail to create atmosphere. Apply visual “framing” to slow the scene to show what matters. Explore the keyboard tools of a working writer’s kit that guide the reader’s attention. In the task, you will sketch a rough first chapter outline, try famous chapter structures for sandboxing yours, and draft an opening to test how your story behaves on the page.‍
  14. Lesson 29: Please Yourself
    Learn what it means to write for yourself first, choose the company you want to keep on the page, and trust the routine that makes writing possible. Understand how reading unlocks ease, how early beginnings stay loose until the ending is known, and why play, doubt, and curiosity are part of the work. Use a practical set-up that protects your process; your folders, rolling documents, notes, problems page, and small daily checks on theme, treatment, and character. In the task, you will organize your writing life and consider the signals of pleasure, discomfort, instinct that help you choose the version of your story you really want to write.
  15. Lesson 30: The Last Piece
    Enjoy time with your main character and enter their inner life. Learn how to keep the story warm when you’re not writing. Lean to keep eyes on the real sources of drama; the problem, the want, the flaw and how to spot issues clearly by returning to the outline. Discover why cutting creates space, why you rule the process, and be rewarded with the key that opens the door to your story.

Write the first draft with a lesson a day and coaching from a bestselling author at every stage. Six phases, one hundred lessons.

PHASE ONE · 10 LESSONS

The Inspiration and Preparation Phase

Discover the big hack that will change your creative life. Learn the one characteristic great writers need, and the essential ingredient for a page-turner. 10 writerly espresso shots to take in one day, or a weekend.

  • Welcome
    Set the foundation for writing your novel with a day to take these ten espresso shots to boost your morale and get you in the flow. Kick some old habits with some unusual tips to change your state of mind to one that is positively refreshed and raring to write.
  • Read and Be Inspired
    Read what you want to write. Study first chapters to see how great novels raise questions they later answer. Focus on story over style. Use reading to quell doubt daily, and build your confidence. Keep notes and prepare questions for your coach as your story begins to take shape.
  • Bedtime Stories
    Reconnect with the books that first stirred a desire to write. Reflect on the emotional imprint of your early reading. Writing begins with that same private charge. Let gratitude, not pressure, guide the work. The impulse to write is your longing to speak across time and space.
  • Habits
    Design a writing life that fits your real one. Build a simple routine that anchors your writing at a regular time each day. Avoid waiting for inspiration; consistency is the key.
  • The Big Hack
    Make a meaningful sacrifice for a big reward. Something must go. Identify what you’ll give up to honor the work ahead. Stop the cycle of perfectionism by writing fast and free. Write by hand in timed sessions to bypass the inner critic. Capture raw material first. Refinement comes later.
  • Privacy
    Protect your work from feedback, judgment, or scrutiny while it’s still forming. Keep the process private. Don’t announce your novel or share early pages. Privacy is the condition for freedom of exploration and free-range creativity!
  • Empathy
    Build a character by stepping inside their experience. Begin with feeling, not facts. Let your empathy lead. Treat your character as an enigma. Tease out their contradictions for a more intriguing story.
  • Moods
    Track your emotional state and work with it, not against it. Use your current mood as material. Keep writing through restlessness, boredom, or doubt. Let the act of writing transform your mood, rather than relying on your mood to begin.
  • Bless You, Writers
    You’ll face loneliness, and self-doubt, but writing is an act of generosity. Writing well means living well; in other words self-acceptance. Keep faith with your story. Remember, a novelist needs questions, not answers.
  • What is Story?
    A story begins with change. It puts a person in jeopardy. In fiction, people change, and the story is structured around that. Plot is the engine that reveals who your character truly is capable of becoming.
PHASE TWO · 30 LESSONS

The Construction Phase

Take it steady with step-by-step guidance to prepare a one-page story plan that packs a big plot. This is where you go beyond an idea or first outline into a fully-fleshed novel plan. A good story (almost) writes itself, so you and your writing coach will begin work on a full-length novel storyline now. For those coming to The Big Write from The Big Idea, there is no overlap of material. We look at some of the same all-important aspects of a novel, differently, as part of an overarching plot.

  1. Lesson 1: How to stay on track with the course
    We explain how you will use the first 15 days to plan out your full-length novel storyline and work with your coach using “The Plan” for ongoing feedback to keep your story development on track. If you’re rewriting, use this phase to reassess structure. This is where you set yourself up to finish a first draft.
  2. Lesson 2: Welcome to your novel
    Shape your novel’s premise by crafting a working title, a one-line pitch, and a promise to your reader. Start with something you know or care deeply about, then create distance by shifting time, place, or character to unlock perspective and theme. Identify your protagonist’s flaw and charm, then root your story in the voice and style of books you love. Keep refining the idea daily in your notebook—flipping it, challenging it, adding stakes—until it becomes a story worth the reader’s time.
  3. Lesson 3: The “Hero Book”
    A constant guiding light used by working authors. Choose a single “Hero Book” from our candidates in every genre to guide your novel-writing journey and lean on a clear, reliable structure. Read it nightly to internalize its rhythm and shape. This book becomes your technical mentor, helping you solve story problems as you draft. It’s your companion for the course. Use it to support your structure and voice.
  4. Lesson 4: The golden hour
    Build the habit of showing up daily for one hour to keep your novel alive in your subconscious. Even a brief check in daily, reading yesterday’s work or jotting notes, feeds the 23 other hours of reflection that shape the story. One hour is enough.
  5. Lesson 5: Genre
    You need to get to grips with the drivers of the genre of fiction you have committed to write now. Learn how to use genre to define your reader promise. Explore examples across other fiction in your chosen lane to see how genre shapes plot, character, setting, and theme.
  6. Lesson 6: Setting
    Use your setting to generate atmosphere, reveal character, or frame your story’s moral universe. Research real locations or build imagined ones that feel lived-in and essential to the story. For fantasy or sci-fi, create thresholds between worlds and combine the familiar with the strange. Make setting work as metaphor, emotional driver, and lens for your protagonist’s worldview.
  7. Lesson 7: The magic trick
    Build your story’s arc using this three-part technique of The Pledge, The Turn, and The Prestige. Shape your plot around your character’s transformation: what they want, and what they need. It’s about moral change. Sketch a journey that promises real stakes and delivers powerful, surprising resolution.
  8. Lesson 8: The main character
    Design into your main character a clear flaw. Anchor the plot in their resistance to change. Focus on how they behave under pressure; not backstory, but present struggle. Show what’s at stake for them emotionally. Give them a worldview that will be challenged. The story must test and transform them.
  9. Lesson 9: The plot
    Start shaping your plot by identifying the problem your main character must face. Learn how to use structure as a flexible tool, not a rigid template (please no!), using our methods including working back from a possible ending and sketching key complications along the way. Explore the “Man in a Hole” story shape and other tools. Begin using The Plan, your one-page outline, for your daily story briefing. Focus on pressure, escalation, and change as you throw rocks at your character’s beliefs and force a reckoning point.
  10. Lesson 10: Simple story structure
    First, assess the two halves of the story, problem and solution, and get them anchored by a midpoint that brings transformation. Then use our unique approach to solve the rest of your plot. Use The Five Fs® to map your story’s arc. Each stage reveals your character’s blind spot, trials, and growth. Study examples from contemporary fiction in every genre to see how this long-form story structure works.
  11. Lesson 11: The hook
    Time to refine it now, so it’s sharp as a tack. A new one-sentence pitch that captures your refined premise. Build it around irony to give the story air. Explore techniques from both literary and high-concept fiction, including the “X meets Y” formula. Use your new hook to test your story’s power before you begin writing.
  12. Lesson 12: The cast
    Build your cast by splitting your own traits into characters, then widen the net. Use parts of your personality to shape your leads. Add figures from your life with a twist: change names, genders, or roles. Consider the ethics of representation and whose story you’re telling. Finish with a list of characters who offer the most dramatic potential for your story.
  13. Lesson 13: Character development
    Create credible characters by listing their quirks, flaws, fears, and secrets, then use those to reveal personality through action and dialogue. Skip backstory dumps by knowing each character and what they want. Use our short list of 20 prompts to fast-track this work. Focus on the top five to ten characters and return to this exercise during slower writing days to help move the story along.
  14. Lesson 14: Getting organized
    Before you begin writing, do the housekeeping. Use folders to store drafts, character sheets, and notes. Keep a hard copy of your outline visible at all times and update daily. Use your notebook to capture freewriting. Track your scenes with a spreadsheet and tools.
  15. Lesson 15: The Plan
    Create the refined one-page novel storyline to guide your writing and coaching sessions. Draft your hook, synopsis, theme, and the big question your reader will be reading to answer. Use this live document to shape your plot as you write. Submit your Plan at least 24 hours before each session so your coach can stay up to speed. This working outline will become the backbone of your process all the way toward submission, eventually.
  16. Lesson 16: Let’s write!
    Focus on daily progress; start with 250 words and build gradually. Use your updated Plan weekly to track changes, knowing your plot and character will shift as you write. Show up, write, revise, and keep going.
  17. Lesson 17: Point of view
    Time to nail it down. Choose between first or third person based on your story’s needs. Learn how first person creates immersion and unreliability while third offers distance, breadth, and universality. Test them on the page, including using free indirect speech as a powerful tool to blend close perspective with third-person narration.
  18. Lesson 18: Voice
    Let your voice emerge from you see the world. A good voice convinces by understatement. Explore examples of relaxed, confident storytelling in action. Avoid fakery or flourish. Use our tools to assert your voice, all-important in the age of AI. The goal is to invite the reader into an intimate human conversation.
  19. Lesson 19: Chapter one
    First chapters are never final, they’re rewritten dozens of times. Set a calm, confident tone, introducing character and setting, and offer up something awry to pique your reader’s interest. Focus on what your protagonist wants, hint at what they need. Write 250 relaxed words.
  20. Lesson 20: Character mapping
    Design each supporting character with a moral arc that affects your protagonist’s development. Ensure each character throws “rocks” at the hero to reveal flaws and create friction. Distribute your cast across the moral range of your theme. Use The Novelry’s Four Types Method as a tool for the close-knit core.
  21. Lesson 21: Relationships
    Map the web of relations, noting each character’s role as helper or hinderer, anchoring your story in conflict and desire. Study push-pull dynamics for high drama. Conjure subplots with hidden motives and unspoken needs. Create a visual map to find narrative pressure points. Let the tension between characters help you with plot holes now.
  22. Lesson 22: Emotional strategies
    Assign each major character a core emotional strategy: how they’ve learned to get love and attention. Observe how this ingrained tactic shapes their relationships, and drives their conversations. Characters may switch strategies but one dominant ploy can underpin each principal’s behavior, to the reader’s delight.
  23. Lesson 23: The theme
    Test every story element now against a central thematic tension: what argument is your novel truly making? Place your protagonist at the center of a tug-of-war of values. Use bold statements like “X is more likely than Y” to guide your choices. Add your refined working theme to The Plan.
  24. Lesson 24: The heart of a story
    Find the emotional truth at the center of your novel. A moment of vulnerability or personal reckoning that carries moral weight and matters hugely to you. This becomes your compass, and the story’s purpose: to make us care.
  25. Lesson 25: The names
    A small piece of code which packs a lot of data. Choose early, and consider ways of charging the names of your characters using an emotive shorthand that will prove useful to your reader too.
  26. Lesson 26: The sacrifice
    Learn how great stories in every genre use sacrifice, where the protagonist gives up comfort for a greater purpose. Ask what your characters are willing to lose.
  27. Lesson 27: A better craftsman
    Step back from the page and assess your work. Re-read your recent writing to identify weak scenes, tired phrasing, and moments where the plot drifts. Revisit your Plan, revise it if the story has shifted, and tighten.
  28. Lesson 28: The big picture
    Visualize your story as a sequence of six turning-point scenes, using cinematic techniques to clarify structure and momentum. Identify your protagonist, goal, antagonistic force, and stakes. Then build a visual storyboard using notecards or tools like Canva to map transitions and flesh out scenes. Each location must earn its place.
  29. Lesson 29: Happy writing
    Work through self-doubt, and the ups and downs of real life. Try some proven mindset strategies from working writers including how to embrace the rhythms of good and bad writing days. Avoid nervy fiddling, and trust your day-to-day process.
  30. Lesson 30: Taking stock
    Pause to review progress before moving to the next phase. Use the stocktaking spreadsheet to chart chapter-by-chapter word counts, setbacks, and lessons learned. Update The Plan and reflect on how far you’ve come. Schedule time with your coach before the next leg: The Swim.

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PHASE THREE · 15 LESSONS

The Swim Phase

Expert craft skills. Find your voice as your word count passes the 10,000-word mark.

  1. Lesson 31: In the swim
    A shift from story set-up to story flow. Revisit the five-part structure to add to the plot and shape the story now. Retain focus on output, not polish. Learn how compulsion drives story. When a character wants something almost beyond reason, the novel almost writes itself. This new phase is about rhythm, grace, and pace.
  2. Lesson 32: Moral range
    Find your detonator. Know what will set off a story explosion by exploring your protagonist’s moral range. Define what they can and can’t do, and identify the lie they live by. Use this to create tension scene by scene now as the story shifts from old world to new. Know what they’ll do when cornered to drive maximum emotional impact chapter by chapter.
  3. Lesson 33: Compulsion
    Pinpoint your main character’s hidden need that drives their actions and blinds them to the truth. Desire, denial, and delusion create narrative drive. Explore their inner hunger. Repressed or transgressive compulsions can bring extra page-turning drama. TIme to expose the character’s organizing myth.
  4. Lesson 34: Conflict
    Conflict reveals theme. Let your protagonist and antagonist pull from opposite ends of a moral or emotional spectrum. Use tension to test values, surface hidden agendas, and create moments of rupture that lay turhts bare. Design and decide the moment of greatest conflict so that it dramatizes the central question of your novel now.
  5. Lesson 35: From magic to mystery
    Shift from plotting answers to posing questions: what the reader is reading to find out, and what you’re writing to discover as the author. Use the one-page plan to hold structure while staying open to surprises. At the two-thirds mark of the story, you can plan to allow spiritual meaning to emerge. Allow for some mystery to drive the story forward for you and the reader.
  6. Lesson 36: How to write a cult classic
    Borrow Jack Kerouac’s methods to create immersive, character-led fiction. Study his use of real people, not types, and mimic his overfamiliarity and snappy prose and dialogue to bring the music to your voice. Use observation to dodge over exposition, for the the illusion of spontaneity. Time to move toward your own bold, idiosyncratic work.
  7. Lesson 37: A real dream
    Master the technique of “show, don’t tell” by using concrete sensory detail and true-to-life dialogue. Build vivid scenes while still knowing when to step in and tell to expedite plot details.
  8. Lesson 38: Assumed familiarity
    Immerse the reader instantly by bringing characters to life without formal introduction. Kerouac uses eccentricity, catchphrases, and vivid, selective detail to distinguish a large cast. Use tics, colorful backstories, and out-of-type traits to avoid stereotypes and animate even minor characters.
  9. Lesson 39: The romantic imagination
    Build your authorial approach of taste, sensibility, and theme. Channel your own aesthetic preferences into character and story. Discover how to make the uncommon and the unlikely feel true using fiction to paint a new reality.
  10. Lesson 40: The use of repetition
    Use repetition to build intimacy with economy. Establish character through repeated phrases or gestures. Repetition keeps the reader’s eye on the cast while you advance the theme. Deploy signature catchphrases that echo the novel’s central question rather than using heavy-handed mechanics that labor your theme.
  11. Lesson 41: Redemption
    Great fiction offers moral judgment through affection and time. Learn how to use the redemptive arc. Study the technique of flash-forward to deliver a sense of earned perspective. Redemption can be quiet. Understand how even flawed characters can be forgiven, and why good writing must show grace.
  12. Lesson 42: Keep it simple
    Streamline your story by asking: whose story is this, what do they learn, and how do they change? Reduce characters, settings, and complications that aren’t essential. Troubleshoot problems like weak conflict or a protagonist too close to yourself. Use our quick fixes to create distance. Anchor the plot in present conflict, not backstory, for a clean, energetic through-line.
  13. Lesson 43: Overwriting
    Cut, cut, cut! Cut overwriting before it sabotages your story. This lesson shows how bloated prose; didactic tangents, tired set pieces, excessive emotion, and decorative adverbs, slow your pace. Great writers use restraint. Apply three core techniques: trim adjectives and adverbs, reduce description to pinpointed detail, and shorten sentence length. Good writing leaves space for the reader.
  14. Lesson 44: Becoming an author
    Start working like a professional preparing for publication now. Learn how to format your manuscript correctly and apply it now. Spacing, punctuation, paragraphing, and chapter layout all contribute to how the reader receives your work. This lesson sets the standards that separate the aspiring writer from the working author.
  15. Lesson 45: The midpoint
    Pinpoint the exact moment when your character can no longer go back at the midpoint of the novel. Identify the event or crisis that forces a shift in strategy, where their old ways fail and a new outlook begins. Show how they absorb qualities of their antagonist, confront hard truths, and begin their transformation. Update The Plan with this turning point. This lesson crystallizes your story’s change: what they wanted was wrong; now it’s time to fight for what they need. And into the second half!
PHASE FOUR · 15 LESSONS

The Heat Phase

Into the second half and it’s time to raise the stakes in your story.

  1. Lesson 46: Music
    Use music as a tool to charge the energy and rhythm of your writing. This lesson introduces the Heat Phase with a focus on boosting pace and word count too.
  2. Lesson 47: From What If to Why?
    Shift the driving question of your novel from “What if?” to “Why?” to deepen plot and character. Refine the core reader question using Maslow’s hierarchy of needs starting from physical survival and safety to love, esteem, and purpose. Bestselling novels sustain tension through a single, evolving question. Use your character’s willful refusal to meet their basic needs to push the plot. Dig into what your character won’t do and why.
  3. Lesson 48: The B Story
    Construct a subplot that amplifies your novel’s theme and throws the main character’s journey into sharper relief. This secondary storyline should represent the opposite value system or outcome as embodied by a standout secondary character and bring it into conflict with the “A” plot. Authors use B Stories to expose the moral consequences of your protagonist’s choices. Decide where this subplot will peak, ensuring it helps your hero reject the extreme of your theme and make their own way forward.
  4. Lesson 49: The lie
    Find your novel’s core message by identifying the lie it exposes. Lies fuel suspense! We examine how theme emerges when falsehood is revealed. Reframe character motivation by showing what they believe that isn’t true, and structure your novel as a journey from illusion to truth. Learn how to embed the lie in dialogue, catchphrases, and chapter turns to keep the reader gripped.
  5. Lesson 50: I’m a creep
    Use your shadow self to unlock honesty in your writing. Identify your flaws and contradictions. Practice observing your darkest instincts, then shape them into your protagonist’s turning point. Learn to slow narrative time around moments of self-revelation to weight them.
  6. Lesson 51: Suspense
    Build suspense by withholding information and creating unease. Study how novels like Rebecca and In a Dark, Dark Wood use repetition, contradiction, and delay to disorient the reader. Use short chapters, flashbacks, and emotionally charged contrasts—hot/cold, light/dark—to keep tension rising. Assign a “trigger word” to each chapter and increase danger over time. Withhold answers until after the midpoint, where the worst thing must happen. Suspense is built on uncertainty. What the reader fears is more powerful than what they know.
  7. Lesson 52: Make it harder
    Impose constraints to sharpen your writing: shorten chapters, limit word counts, or apply a ticking clock. Increase external pressure on your main character: cut resources, create urgency. Tight structure boosts pace, and limits force invention. The harder the context, the stronger the message.
  8. Lesson 53: Crackling conversations
    Learn how to craft character agendas, cut exposition, and leave space for subtext. Discover how to avoid dull “ping-pong” exchanges and use silence, refusal, or abrupt exits for tension. Explore why contractions, clipped speech, and differentiated voices make dialogue real. Master clean tags, minimal adverbs, and active speech hat reveals character.
  9. Lesson 54: That’s peculiar!
    Learn how to write with dissonance, deliberately using details that just don’t fit. Study the masters of the short form, like Chekhov, Carver, and Hemingway, to show what jars instead of what explains. Use visual anomalies to jolt your reader’s perception and avoid having to rely on melodrama. Highlight oddities and peculiarities that linger in the mind.
  10. Lesson 55: The leitmotif
    Discover how a lightly recurring detail, like a phrase, image, or object, can build intimacy between writer and reader. Explore subtle echoes that function like a shared in-joke or chorus. Thread a small motif through your novel to highlight emotional themes.
  11. Lesson 56: The absurd
    Introduce the irrational into your novel to deepen realism. Draw from Camus, Kafka, and Vonnegut to explore characters in conflict with a meaningless world. Use contradiction, bathos, and surreal events for existential truths. Give characters odd behaviors or false beliefs and unlock humor in tragedy. Absurdity lets your story bypass logic to process pain. Add a comic wrong note! Let the bizarre do some heavy lifting.
  12. Lesson 57: The full stop. Period.
    You will study radical economy of style to understand the emotional power of unaffected prose. Learn how to end scenes and chapters with impact using the “dying fall”, a literary technique that creates an introspective pause. Use punctuation, silence, and space to invite the reader in. Then stop. Let them think.
  13. Lesson 58: Backstory
    Minimize backstory to keep momentum. Avoid digressions and let the present action reveal character. If background must be included, use it only when it advances the story. Draft a private inventory of essential backstory in your notebook then work around it.
  14. Lesson 59: Transitions
    Learn how to shift between timelines or perspectives while maintaining the progress of the story. Structure each timeline to serve the story. Study structural examples from novels to master seamless cuts. Build dual narratives that interact meaningfully. Whether you are using alternating chapters or blending timelines inside scenes, use each shift to advance the theme. Transitions must feel inevitable, and a boon to the reading experience, not a sideways pass.
  15. Lesson 60: The prize
    Consider what success means for you now as you enter the last stretch. Don’t show or share your draft yet. Keep your vision intact and hunker down for momentum. Book another coaching session to bring your author coach up to speed before you move into the next phase.
PHASE FIVE · 15 LESSONS

The Enlightenment Phase

In which everything that was hidden is revealed to both the writer and the reader. Discover the deft touches that give the reader those “a-ha” moments, and see the proof on the page that you’re mastering the skills of the craft.

  1. Lesson 61: Mastery
    Enter The Enlightenment Phase by studying a master at work, Nobel Laureate, J.M. Coetzee. His novel Disgrace becomes one of your blueprints for serious fiction in this pahse along with Alice Walker and The Color Purple. Embrace slow, scrutinized craft. Discover moral sleight of hand, structural control, and linguistic precision. Learn how personal wreckage becomes literary gold.
  2. Lesson 62: Difficult questions
    Embrace uncertainty. Discover how doubt, revision, and slow accumulation work for your craft and the material in fine detail.
  3. Lesson 63: Self-destruction
    Great novelists create fiction through radical self-erasure. The main character and author come to blows in philosophical confrontation. In the best fiction writing, we are served an unflinching confrontation with shame. Writing at this level you need to get a grasp on your internal conflict. Willingness to burn down the house of self yields a story of brutal grace. 
  4. Lesson 64: The title
    A novel’s title encapsulates the agent of change. Test titles against your story’s evolution, generating titles that capture the magic of your story.
  5. Lesson 65: The wound
    A wound drives a character’s compulsion. Write suffering without sentimentality for integrity of craft.
  6. Lesson 66: The bridge
    Revisit your opening sentence again now; it should beckon the story’s ending. Track how character and language have evolved.
  7. Lesson 67: Back and forth process
    Embrace the messy business of drafting but get ahead of the game now and avoid a draft or two with some insights to deliver this book in better shape than most at first draft. This lesson draws from J.M. Coetzee’s 17 drafts of Disgrace to show how great work emerges from doubt. Taste and judgment are sharpened by failure.
  8. Lesson 68: Present tension
    Explore the dramatic force of the present for instability, complicity, and immediacy by removing the safety of hindsight. Through examples like Disgrace and The Color Purple, see how the narration drives urgency and places the reader inside the character’s crisis. If your prose feels flat, consider testing a change of tense now to rescue it.
  9. Lesson 69: Poet and programmer
    Refine your sentence style with the dual precision of a programmer and the emotional depth of a poet. Rhythm is a literary device. Discover how prose can carry musicality, and also advance line by line, with the precision of code.
  10. Lesson 70: The chapter outline
    Create a revised working chapter-by-chapter outline to clarify the structure and pacing of your novel. Use it to identify gaps, and simplify where needed. Study Coetzee’s Disgrace for a model of formal, purpose-driven structure: 24 chapters, each self-contained, each building tension and meaning. Focus on progress with economy: state your purpose, fulfill it, and move on. Use the outline to ensure every chapter earns its place.
  11. Lesson 71: Let them live
    Free your main character from their backstory now and let them step forward toward the ending. The best characters contradict their traits, hold true and false beliefs, and surprise both the writer and reader. Leave room for ambiguity at the end, allowing your novel to cast a longer shadow.
  12. Lesson 72: The point of tragedy
    Tragedy operates as a vehicle for truth. Learn Aristotle’s three essential components: hamartia, peripeteia, and anagnorisis. Understand how tragedy forces reckoning. Tragedy delivers absolute truth through emotional disasters.
  13. Lesson 73: What is good?
    Fiction transcends our basic notions of good and bad to offer moral ambiguity. Learn how to use visionary states like hypnagogia to deepen your protagonist’s self-awareness. Trace a character arc from egotism to humility, observing how memory, vision, and anagnorisis (tragic recognition) shape internal reckoning. It is grace, not goodness, the author delivers.
  14. Lesson 74: The big question
    Refine the question driving your story by identifying what the reader is reading to find out: whether it’s whodunnit, will they get the prize, or who is this person really? Study how this central question can shift mid-novel, as in The Talented Mr. Ripley or Disgrace, as character, setting, or theme develops.
  15. Lesson 75: The story so far
    Review the full arc of your novel. Your character, and you, have come a long way. Neither of you are who you were. Book a coaching session and update The Plan. This is your opportunity to reframe the entire work, strengthen the through-line, and prepare to carry the story forward to the end now you have everything in plain sight.
PHASE SIX · 15 LESSONS

The Home Phase

Where it all comes together: theme, arc, change. The subplots are now working in harmony for a satisfying ending. You’ll have a first draft manuscript in your hands and a story readers will love.

  1. Lesson 76: Welcome home
    Review the final structure and make adjustments so the story is sound and grounded. Contrast your main character’s initial façade with their new self to clarify the novel’s arc. Use dream imagery and metaphor to explore how personal symbols, memories, and meaning can enrich your story. Prepare a sketch of the ending. The home stretch begins here.
  2. Lesson 77: Let’s build
    Assign your existing chapters to the Five Fs framework. Use this scaffolding to make sense of your draft and prepare it for a strong finish. Reorder material, if needed, to clarify escalation and transformation. Whether your chapters are short or long, give each a place in this sequence.
  3. Lesson 78: The house of magic
    Use music and hypnagogic recall to explore each emotional stage of the story as a space: a messy front room, a closed bedroom, a blocked escape, a chaotic kitchen, and a bathroom of reckoning. Revise your Plan and schedule a coaching session to align story shape and character change.
  4. Lesson 79: The rooms
    Plan your chapters as spaces within the larger structure of the house of your novel. Avoid plot drift; make sure every chapter flows naturally from the last. Cut anything that doesn’t develop both the psychological interior and action-oriented exterior.
  5. Lesson 80: Interior style
    Raise the standard of your writing by setting a higher bar for every sentence. Evaluate every line: is it necessary, true, distinctive? Create contrast. Plain-speaking can sharpen the impact of strangeness.
  6. Lesson 81: Ornaments
    Lend your novel the personal things that bring you comfort and joy: the objects, sounds, and memories that mean something to you.
  7. Lesson 82: The attic
    Learn how to use memory as a narrative space distinct from backstory. This is where you and your main character explore forgotten emotions and formative impressions. Use this mental storehouse to create atmospheric revelations. The attic holds what’s unsaid. Return to it in moments of reckoning or reflection.
  8. Lesson 83: Housekeeping
    Learn how to recover from derailment without spiraling. Use your notebook to make quick notes instead of forcing bad writing. Trust your Plan and cut what doesn’t serve. Keep the novel safe, warm, and clean from inner sabotage.
  9. Lesson 84: And so to bed
    Craft an ending that opens, rather than closes, a window. Examine famous last lines that conjure mystery, and understand how a question could become your final gesture. Complete your draft knowing it’s whole, for now.
  10. Lesson 85: Home alone
    Writing reveals more than its words. Don’t seek outside opinions yet. Stay inside the work. Keep the mystery intact. The story has found its voice now, and you may need to sit with it.
  11. Lesson 86: First aid kit
    Use these tips as a personal survival guide for when the doubt creeps in. A writer’s emergency kit for staying the course and finishing strong.
  12. Lesson 87: Leaving home
    Pause before editing. Set the manuscript aside for at least a month to gain the distance required for ruthless revision. Use that time to sharpen your judgment. Make sure the story arises from character, offers transformation, and delivers what the reader needs.
  13. Lesson 88: The second draft
    Use the break to read recent novels in your genre, experiment with “sideways writing.” Revisit your story with distance as a reader. Prepare for The Big Edit, where you’ll receive expert editorial support to transform your draft into a submission-ready novel.
  14. Lesson 89: Success
    Discover how to stay grounded through setbacks, resist the lure of fame, and preserve your joy. You are a writer. You have written a book. Embrace the the life and work of a writer.
  15. Lesson 90: Congratulations!
    Celebrate! You’ve built the habit, learned the craft, and shaped a novel only you could write. Acknowledge the discipline it took you to get here. Download your certificate, share the news, and put your feet up. For a month.

Plus genre-specific lessons, mini courses in memoir and children’s fiction, and resources.

Authors mentioned in the course include: Jane Austen, Donna Tartt, Kazuo Ishiguro, Stephen King, Raymond Chandler, Patricia Highsmith, Daphne du Maurier, Gillian Flynn, George Saunders, Kurt Vonnegut, Shirley Jackson, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Rachel Cusk, Sally Rooney, Ian McEwan, Emily Brontë, Zadie Smith, Toni Morrison, Jean Rhys, Carson McCullers, Charles Dickens, Agatha Christie, Ernest Hemingway.

Your course certificate

Revise to submission standard: a structural edit, a line edit and the submission package, with two editorial sessions. Four phases, thirty-five lessons.

PHASE ONE · 2 LESSONS

Welcome to The Big Edit

Go from writer to author with a clear, strategic roadmap, practical tools, smart systems, and a new publishing-ready mindset shift. Get a clear editorial roadmap and a structured revision process designed to take a manuscript to submission standard. The Big Edit is designed to save you drafts by front-loading editorial expertise for strategic story development before you move to line edits.

  1. Lesson 1: Welcome
    Commit to working in long, focused sessions as you begin the structural edit phase of your novel. Learn the four-phase roadmap ahead, from Structural Development through the Line Edit to your Submission Process, and discover when to book your Big Edit sessions with editors who’ve acquired, edited, and published books at Big Five houses. Set your first draft aside and start raising your standards — this is where you stop writing for yourself and start shaping a novel for publication.‍
  2. Lesson 2: Preparation Guide
    Learn to read your own work like a professional editor, using the formatting standards publishing houses expect — fonts, margins, indentation, and dialogue conventions, US and UK covered side by side. This lesson shows you how to build the critical distance you’ll need to edit with a reader’s eye.
PHASE TWO · 13 LESSONS

Structural Development

You’ll develop your elevator pitch, story theme, structure, narrative arc, character development, midpoint, and more to work toward a chapter outline and a (pain-free) synopsis. Then it’s time for your first review session with a professional editor.

  1. Lesson 3: The Structural Edit
    Understand the difference between a structural edit and a line edit, and why you must get your story’s big-picture elements right before you touch a single sentence. Expect bold, sweeping changes at this early stage for the very best version of your book.
  2. Lesson 4: The Hook
    Distill your novel’s premise into a single sentence that gets an agent excited. Learn the one-line pitch equation drawn from novels that sold for six and seven figures, and what your particular genre demands of its pitch. Pressure-test it until it’s sharp enough to pin to your wall.
  3. Lesson 5: The Genre
    Nail the genre your novel belongs to, and the promise it makes to readers before they’ve read a word. Explore the key genres and their subgenres, how blending and mashups work when they’re done well. Your genre decides which shelf your book sits on and every editorial choice that follows.
  4. Lesson 6: The Title
    Find the title that works as a statement of intent. Use the “walk your title” method to identify your story’s agent of change, the event after which nothing can be the same, and compare candidates with popular examples.
  5. Lesson 7: The Storyline
    Get to grips with the driver of every story: change. Identify your agent of change, and combine theme, conflict, and character into your plot. Nail your inciting incident, midpoint, and ending before you rewrite your working synopsis.
  6. Lesson 8: Story Structure with The Five Fs©
    Develop your best story structure and chart your character’s moral journey using The Novelry’s Five Fs©. Learn how to apply this story spine identifying the turning points that expose your protagonist’s arc from first flaw to final reckoning.
  7. Lesson 9: The Synopsis
    Turn your story into a snappy one-pager that proves your plot delivers with this diagnostic tool to reveal whether your story’s structure is actually working. Use our “steps up, steps down” model to shape your synopsis and practice the professional potted version agents expect.
  8. Lesson 10: The Chapter Outline
    Build a chapter-by-chapter account of your novel that turns your story structure and synopsis into a concrete plan of action. Learn what Big Five editors look for. This document becomes your guide for the redraft, and, alongside your synopsis, what you’ll submit ahead of your Big Edit First Session.
  9. Lesson 11: Casting
    Make sure every character earns their place on the page by mapping the main players along our “rope of theme.” Try our Four Types framework and learn to root each major player in circumstances, associations, and distinguishing detail.
  10. Lesson 12: Character
    Give characters agency by anchoring their actions in desire. Explore how deprivation creates compulsion, and how to empower the most disempowered characters. Use practical tools like our “Character Agency Ladder” to drive agency and story.
  11. Lesson 13: Character Mapping & Relationships
    Identify your core team of around five to fifteen players and make sure each earns their place in the story. Study the web of relationships through their reciprocal wants and needs. Finish by building a visual character map to guide your scene-building.
  12. Lesson 14: The Big Edit 1st Session
    Time to hand over your story for expert review: let’s meet your Big Five publishing editor! Complete the one-page document covering your genre, title, hook, synopsis, central reader question, theme, word count, and deadline, and prepare your optional chapter outline to submit alongside it. This is your first opportunity to see your story the way a publishing editor would.
  13. Lesson 15: After Your BE1 Session
    Your first session is done and the notes have arrived. Learn how to take structural feedback on board and turn it into the next draft of your novel.
PHASE THREE · 15 LESSONS

The Line Edit

You’ll interrogate your pacing, perspective, and treatment, to rework chapters, drilling down into sentence structure and word choice, eliminating overwriting line-by-line. Learn how to apply The Lucid Compression Technique© for outstanding prose from the first chapter. Then, it’s time for feedback on your writing.

  1. Lesson 16: The Line Edit
    Learn what a line edit involves, and how to read your writing the way an editor reads it on a sentence level.
  2. Lesson 17: Pacing
    Condense any slack in your timeline, and test every chapter against three essentials: a reminder of the stakes, new information, and a reason to turn the page. Master the domino effect and foreshadow with intent.
  3. Lesson 18: Voice & Perspective
    Find the voice that’s authentically yours, then choose the vantage point that best serves your story. Work through the real differences between first, second, third, and omniscient perspective, and apply some useful rules of thumb to finalize the best POV for your story.
  4. Lesson 19: Show, Don’t Tell
    Learn to recognize the hiding places of “telling” from adverb-heavy dialogue tags to backstory and the legitimate tools (exposition, flashback, interiority, dialogue) for feeding readers information without an info-dump.
  5. Lesson 20: Dialogue
    Craft true-to-life dialogue that drives drama, reveals conflict, and sounds natural. For conversations that serve the story, give every character their own agenda to break the “ping-pong” rhythm of question-and-answer and cut exposition dumps.
  6. Lesson 21: Setting & Scenes
    Decide who’s present, whose point of view we follow, and where each scene is best set to bring the drama. Learn why the problem of your world should be the problem of your character, and how to create atmosphere. Master your set-pieces with detail that grounds a scene.
  7. Lesson 22: Overwriting
    Strip your prose of clutter. Diagnose and treat overwriting — the most common weakness in early drafts. Spot symptoms like didactic prose, clichéd expressions, overuse of adverbs, and redundant descriptions. Use our editorial checklist to trim sentence length, cut the fluff, and refine your style.
  8. Lesson 23: Sentence Structure
    Master logic flow, active versus passive voice, and the word order that keeps meaning clear. Vary your sentence length to create rhythm. Try our compression drills for pithy, natural sentences. Learn why shorter sentences land harder.
  9. Lesson 24: The Word
    Study how repetition, sound, and subliminal patterning shape a story word by word to create your novel’s DNA. Learn how to replace the “weasel” words that dull your prose. Explore word choice as a tool of seduction.
  10. Lesson 25: The Lucid Compression Technique©
    Refine your prose with The Novelry's own technique for high-resolution openings: Lucid Compression©. Edit your opening for maximum sensory impact with our secret sauce for award-winning writing.
  11. Lesson 26: Punctuation
    Use punctuation to clue the reader into your behind-the-scenes game. Learn how line-level choices operate as instructions to the reader as to what to think and feel and when.
  12. Lesson 27: Copy Editing & Proofreading
    Understand the final polish the professionals apply, how to work with tracked changes, and how to sweep your manuscript for errors of grammar, spelling, consistency, and continuity line by line, with fresh eyes.
  13. Lesson 28: The First Sentence & the First Chapter
    Craft a first sentence that establishes the voice, signals change, and primes the reader for what’s to come. Use our unique “Thing One/Thing Two” structure to plan your all-important early paragraphs.
  14. Lesson 29: The Prologue
    Test your opening against the five ingredients of a prologue, and practice urgency and theme in motion.
  15. Lesson 30: Get Feedback
    Get feedback on your writing now with peer critique, a one-on-one editorial session, or a full report.
PHASE FOUR · 5 LESSONS

The Submission Process

Your second session with a professional book editor will involve reviewing your pitch letter, synopsis, and first three chapters, and making a plan to enter the publishing process via literary agency representation.

  1. Lesson 31: The Query Package
    Assemble the three documents that will win a full-manuscript request: the query letter, the synopsis, and a polished sample of your first three chapters. Master the five elements of a strong query letter — the hook, the story, the market, the agent, the author. Choose great comparison titles, format your manuscript to industry standard, and steer clear of the red flags.
  2. Lesson 32: The Market
    Position your novel the way the industry does: on the commercial-to-literary spectrum and within the word-count range expected of your genre.
  3. Lesson 33: Literary Agents
    Apply for The Novelry’s submission service or query independently. Build a longlist and shortlist of agents. From tracking responses to interpreting feedback and handling rejection, discover how to assess offers, meet agents, and make the best decisions for your writing career.
  4. Lesson 34: Author Career Advice
    Follow the deal from acquisition to publication day: how editors pitch a book internally, how an advance is actually paid out, and why a small advance doesn't mean a small career. Get practical guidance on starting book two, building income beyond royalties, and handling social media and reviews.
  5. Lesson 35: The Big Edit 2nd Session
    Guidance to prepare your first three chapters, query letter, and synopsis, formatted to industry standard, and book your Big Edit Second Session with your editor to get your next steps toward publishing.

Your finished manuscript gets a full read from our editorial team — the Ultimate Manuscript Assessment.

The Pitch

It is important to tighten the premise of your story into a single sentence, often called the pitch or the hook. This is one of the most important tools when it comes to securing an agent, so we always begin here. We will give you top tips to improve your pitch so that it’s compelling and designed to excite publishers. We also look at your ambition and how your work meets the requirements of your genre for your intended audience, offering ideas on how your novel or memoir might be positioned and its potential within the current market.

Structural Development

You will receive a detailed report of some 20 pages that evaluates every aspect of your entire manuscript, from the writing and the structure to the setting and the characters. We look at both the big picture (such as the narrative arc, plot beats, character arcs, and central questions) as well as the finer details (such as subplots and pacing), offering advice and practical steps so that you can continue to improve your manuscript.

We’ll examine it just as an editor would in a publishing house.

A Marked-Up Manuscript

Our manuscript assessment report includes a marked-up manuscript that focuses on the detail of your creative writing, considering what each scene adds to your story, your characters, and your overall plot development. We highlight the best sentences and flag areas for improvement so that you can make sure your story really shines.

Meeting with the Editor

For those seeking feedback to make an informed decision as to their next steps, nothing beats the opportunity to have meaningful dialogue with experienced industry professionals connected to the publishing industry worldwide. Writing a novel is a long haul and the least you deserve from a paid service is to enjoy a session where the focus is entirely on you and your manuscript.

You will be invited to book a 45-minute in-person debrief with your editor to discuss their feedback on your creative work. This is an opportunity for you to ask further questions and discuss in detail your writing process onward toward becoming traditionally published. This online meeting is recorded for you to keep and is included as part of your manuscript assessment.

Next Steps Toward Publishing

You will receive an action plan with guidance and advice on how to implement our feedback. If your manuscript requires further work, we will include a detailed follow-up plan and offer suggestions for next steps. You can then book any further Paid Feedback Sessions with our editors to work together toward submitting your manuscript to leading literary agencies.

Membership of The Novelry gives writers access to over 60 writing classes a month, including guest events with authors, literary agents, and publishing professionals, plus recorded masterclasses and our writing community of beta readers for ad-hoc feedback. What’s more, you will find yourself supported by other writers like you worldwide who will cheer you on at every step. A published author needs a platform, and The Novelry gets behind each and every writer loud and proud to celebrate their success.

If your manuscript is a match for one of our trusted literary agents, you will be invited to enter our submissions process, in which we submit your manuscript to our trusted literary agencies for representation and publication.

your coaching

Coached by a bestselling novelist

Six 45-minute one-on-one sessions with the author coach of your choice across your year. The first to sign off your storyline, five to keep you writing. Their books have hit the New York Times and Sunday Times bestseller lists and been optioned for major motion pictures; every one is an expert in your genre.

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YOUR EDITORIAL SESSIONS

Edited by a Big Five editor and read in full

Every editor on our team has acquired and edited novels at Penguin Random House, Hachette, HarperCollins, Simon & Schuster, or Macmillan. Two editorial sessions in The Big Edit review your plan and then your query package; the Ultimate Manuscript Assessment gives your whole novel a full read, a twenty-page report and a debrief. And because we meet as a team every week to discuss our writers’ work, you get the combined insights and judgment of the whole editorial team.

Submissions

Submissions to the top global literary agencies

If your manuscript is a match for one of our trusted literary agents, you’ll be invited to enter our submissions process. There’s no cost and we neither ask for nor accept commission. It is by invitation, on the strength of the work and it begins at your second editorial session, when your editor reads your opening.

CAA · WME · RCW · The Book Group and more.

from the founder

Every writer is nervous before they begin.

How am I going to find time? How will I know the idea is any good? What does it take to be a good writer? Storytelling is a craft that can be learned. Founder Louise Dean on the year that turns a writer into an author.

The complete journey

One year. A full read. Everything you need.

The Finished Novel Course

The complete program

For those looking for the full novel-writing experience from start to finish.

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3995
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4995
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  • The Big Idea, The Big Write, The Big Edit
  • The Ultimate Manuscript Assessment
  • 6 coaching sessions, 2 editorial sessions
  • A year’s membership

Don’t worry if you need longer. You can stay with the program after your year on a Rollover Plan for just $59 a month.

Don’t worry if you need longer. You can stay with the program after your year on a Rollover Plan for just £49 a month.

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Questions

Anything else? Read the full FAQs.

Is it for me?
How does it compare to a Creative Writing MFA?

An MFA takes two to three years, needs a portfolio to get in and costs $12,000 to $48,000 and publishers aren’t looking for qualifications, only top-quality submissions. The Finished Novel Course is a fraction of the cost and, most importantly, you leave holding a full manuscript, having worked with bestselling authors and Big Five editors to reach publishing standard.

I have a busy life. How much time does it take?

One hour a day. That’s the whole commitment, and it’s enough to take a story from idea to finished manuscript within your year. Each phase is self-paced, so you can fit it around holidays and commitments.

Can I use AI to write my book?

We strongly advise against it, particularly if your goal is publication. Literary agents and publishers now ask writers to confirm that their work was not generated using AI before a contract is signed. Our AI Policy has our full guidance.

I have no story yet. Can I still start?

Yes. The Big Idea, and The Finished Novel Course, which includes The Big Idea as the first step in our program, is designed to help you discover the bold, ambitious story that will carry a whole book, and to stress-test it with your coach before you write a word.

The practicalities
Can I extend the course for longer than the year?

Yes. This is a flexible course you can take at your own pace around your other commitments. With an hour a day it’s comfortably possible to finish your novel in a year and if you need more time, you can extend your course and roll over everything, including any unused coaching, editorial or manuscript sessions.

Another full year is $599, or you can pay monthly and cancel anytime at $59 a month.

How does the coaching work?

Coaching begins in the writing phase. Before each session your coach reviews your storyline through our planning tool, so the 45 minutes go on developing the story, not catching up. Six sessions, booked when you need them, all recorded for you to keep. During the first draft we keep the focus on your storyline and don’t workshop your pages.

We guide you on choosing your coach in the first lessons; you choose, and you’re never locked into a single pairing.

What if it isn’t for me?

A full, no-questions-asked refund within fourteen days of purchase. Just email us.

Do you take commission on successful submissions?

No, and we never will. Most literary consultancies take a 10% commission on your publishing contract; add that to the 15–20% a literary agent takes and 25–30% of your hard-earned income as a writer is gone. We neither ask for nor accept any commission on your advance or future royalties.

What is The Ultimate Manuscript Assessment?

A comprehensive editorial assessment of your complete novel, up to 100,000 words, by a professional editor with Big Five publishing experience. It’s included in The Finished Novel Course and is worth $2,595 USD / £1,995 GBP on its own; members may also purchase it separately.

What’s the learning format?

Every course is self-paced, combining short video and text lessons with downloads and tools that arrive at the right point in your story’s development. Lesson count and structure vary by course; see each course page for its breakdown.